Sunday, April 21, 2013

Miller Lesson 2 Reflection



Lesson 2
Lesson 2 did not go as I had expected. I thought the students would be much more engaged and enjoy drawing pictures of the beginning, middle, and end of the text, but they seemed bored. However, all of the learning objectives were met. Both students included the main points that I included in my lesson plan as evidence of meeting the objectives. However, Dalton said that in the end, the main character’s friend had a toy he wanted, so I needed to probe further and ask, “So what did they do?” He answered, “They traded.” Both students included the detail about the mom not having enough money to buy the boy a new toy, which I thought was interesting. I thought they would have just said that the mom said no, because the detail about not having enough money seems so small in relation to the amount of other details, although it is a big idea of the story. Eliza did not include the boys trading in her drawing of the end of the story, but she drew the main character holding a toy and smiling, as if to indicate that he has a new toy. In her retelling of the story however, she said that they boys traded toys in the end. The students were definitely able to identify the big ideas of the story and summarize it without skipping any important details, and they did not include mainly minor details either. All the objectives were met, and I would say the next step would be having the students practice clearly translating their ideas onto paper and draw more descriptive drawings.
I think a weakness may have been that I was not clear enough in my expectations. I could have told the students to draw very detailed pictures of the beginning, middle, and end but then it might have became more of a visualization task. However, the focus still would have been on the big ideas. I think I could have asked the students several times in different contexts what the big ideas were. I touched on it in the beginning when I told them that this way a way of focusing on the important parts of the story, but it would have been a good idea to talk about that concept throughout the lesson to have them focus on the purpose of the activity. For example, I could have asked them what the big ideas were in the beginning, the middle, and the end instead of asking them to tell me what happened in the beginning, middle, and end. Asking for the big ideas may have been useful for them in the future whenever they are asked to think about big ideas of a text. I thought this activity would be just right for the students, but like I said, it seemed too easy for them. It would have been better for me to look at other assessment data from my MT. Looking back, there may be other reasons why these students did not perform well during my language arts lesson in terms of finding the big ideas. They may not have felt very involved in the discussion or may have been distracted by others. Maybe they did not understand the post-reading assignment as well as the other students or did not know how to put their thoughts onto paper. It probably takes more data than what I used to determine where a student stands. Maybe if I were their teacher and I worked with them every day, I would have known whether or not this task was the best one for them to practice. Also, I think I talked a little too much during this lesson that it almost sounded like a discussion rather than an individual activity. I think I should work on writing better scripts for myself and stick more to them. I also need to relax and let the students have think time rather than moving on to question after question if they do not respond right away.

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